雅思考试作文类型(二)


??Okay, so we’re going to look at basic things to…

??Okay, so we’re going to look at basic things to keep in mind when you’re writing these essays, but the main thing I want to make very clear to everybody: Don’t look for a template for the essay. Every question will require its own approach, its own way of looking at the topic, at the question and the issue, debate, whatever it is, and you have to approach each essay on its own.

好的,所以当你写这些文章的时分,咱们会思考一些根柢的东西,可是我想要告诉我们的最首要的作业是:不要寻找模板。每个疑问都需要特定的办法,特定看待这个论题的方法。疑问和困难,争辩,不管它是啥,你有必要自个处置每一篇文章。

Don’t look for a template that you can try to apply to every question because you can’t. Every type of question has its own approach, every type of. . .

要找一个你可以试着使用于每个疑问的模板,因为你做不到。每一种疑问都有自个的办法,每品种型的……

Every hybrid, for example, has different ways to do it. There’s no one right way to write an essay.

例如,每种混合疑问都有不一样的办法去向置。写文章没有一种正确的办法。

There’s only one right way to express your ideas, that’s what you try to figure out how to do.

只需一种正确表达你的主意的方法,

Right? But the more you practice, the better feel you get for these essays, and you’re able to approach any question with the right things.

这就是你想晓得怎么做的。对吧?可是你操练得越多,你就越能感触得到这些文章,而且你就可以用正确的办法来处置任何疑问。

But having said all of that, a few things to keep in mind. If you’re asked for an opinion, make sure you give an opinion in the introduction: ” I agree that” or ” I agree with” , ” I believe that” , ” In my opinion this is the right way” .

但说了这么多,有几件事要记住。假定你被需求宣告定见,必定要在导语中给出主张:”我附和”或”我附和”,”我信赖”,”在我看来,这是正确的方法”。

Make sure you do this. Now, you don’t have to use ” I” , again, I mentioned this before, but if you’re not sure how to make your opinion very clear to the reader, just tell it to them very directly.

必定要这样做。如今,你并不有必要再用”我”了,我之条件到过,但假定你不晓得如何让读者理解你的观念,直接告诉他们。

” I agree” , ” I believe” , ” In my opinion” , etc. Now, how are you going to build your argument basically in your body paragraphs?

“我附和”、”我信赖”、”在我看来”等等。那么,你要如何在你的主体期间中树立你的观念呢?

Start with your strong argument first in the body paragraph, try to focus only on the side you’re arguing for. So if you agree with side A, spend the time and the words in body paragraph one to convince

先从你的有力观念初步,在正文期间,试着只重视你认可的一方。所以,假定你附和A的观念,把时刻和单词放在body期间里,

the reader that side A is a good side to choose. In side B, in body paragraph two when you’re looking at side B, start with a concession.

让读者信赖A面是一个好的选择。在B有些,当你B谈论的时分,从让步初步。

What this means. . . And talk about side B. What are some good points about the other side?

这意味着啥……谈谈b方,对方的利益是啥?

But make sure it’s short, and make sure you turn it right back around and continue to arguing. . . To argue for your side.

可是要保证它是短的,保证你把论题转回来持续谈论……为你的一方辩解。

By the end of it, by the time you get to the conclusion it should be very clear what your opinion is and why you had it.

到最终,当你得出结论的时分,大约十清楚白你的 观念以及你为啥选择它。

Right? Now, a lot of ways to play with this, but this is the general approach you’re going to be taking: If they’re not asking you for an opinion, don’t give one.

晓得了吗?如今,有许多办法来处置这个疑问,但这是你即将采纳的一般办法:假定他们没有寻求你的定见,不要写。

Again, you can say: ” This essay will look at” , ” discuss” whatever topic you’re looking at or discussing. ” There are several ways to fix pollution, as this essay will demonstrate” .

之后,你可以说:”这篇文章将会重视”,”谈论”你正在看的任何论题。”有几种办法可以处置污染疑问,正如这篇文章所展示的那样。”

So basically you’re telling the reader: ” What is the objective? What is the purpose of the essay” ?

所以根柢上你是在告诉读者:”主体是啥?这篇文章的意图是啥?”

It’s to deliver information or to describe something, or to outline a process, etc. Now, you don’t have to be very obvious either.

它是传递信息或描绘某事,或描绘一个进程,等等。

Right? You don’t have to say: ” This essay will discuss” .

如今,你也不必体现满足图清楚。对吧?你不必说:”这篇文章将会谈论”。

If you know how to write a sentence that makes it very clear to the reader that this is what the objective of the essay is, do that. Okay?

假定你晓得如何写一个语句让读者理解这就是文章的意图,那么就这么做。晓得了吗?

” Though there are several reasons for the high-crime rate in the inner cities, the. . . This particular situation seems to be the most pertinent” , or ” the most obvious” , or ” the most common” .

“尽管有几个缘由致使违法率居高不下,可是……”这种特别情况如同是”最恰当的”,或许是”最显着的”,或许是”最多见的”。

As soon as you say that, I understand that this is what you’re going to be talking about. Right?

一旦你这么说,我就理解了。这就是你要谈论的论题。对吧?”有几个缘由,但这是最重要的一个。”

” There are several reasons, but this is the most important one” . It doesn’t mean I think so, it’s obvious, it’s clear.

这并不料味着我也这么认为,很显着。”在这儿,我将给你一些撑持这一观念的信息或理由。”

” Here, I’m going to give you some information or some reasons to support this observation” . Not opinion, observation.

没有定见,只是调查。正文第一段,缘由一;正文第二段,缘由二。

Body paragraph one, reason one; body paragraph two, reason two. Body paragraph one, advantage one; body paragraph two, disadvantage one.

正文第一段,优势一;正文第二段,缺陷一。优点,害处,比照,衡量。

Benefit, drawback, compare, contrast. Okay?

晓得了吗?一切这些都很简略。

All of these things are very straightforward. Paragraph one, one thing; paragraph two, the second thing; conclusion, therefore all of these things support the idea that this is the more important aspect, or reason, or whatever you’re discussing.

第一段,第一有些;第二段,第二有些;结论,因而一切这些东西都撑持这一观念,即这是更重要的方面,或缘由,或其他啥你谈论的疑问。这些不是模板。

Now, these are not templates. Don’t think of this as a template.

不要把它当作模板。不要在每次撰写客观性论文时都这样做。

Don’t do this every time you have an essay about. . . That’s not an opinion.

这不是一种观念。晓得了吗?

Okay? Sometimes you’ll have to do it in different ways.

有时你需要用不一样的办法来写。好吗?

Okay? Compare, contrast.

比照,比照。你可以在正文第二段中进行比照和比照,你也可以在正文第二段一起比照和比照另一个方面。

You can compare and contrast one aspect in body
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paragraph two, you can compare and contrast another aspect in body paragraph two. Paragraph one, paragraph two.

第一段,第二段。你可以两个方面一块写,也可以一个一个写。

You can do both and both, you can do one and one. Lots of ways to do it.

许多方法。最重要的是:不要宣告定见,要保证读者了解文章的意图,然后以非常清楚的方法组织你的撑持观念。

The main thing is: Don’t give an opinion, make sure the reader understands the objective of the essay, and then organize your ideas in a very clear way to support that. Give your opinion, make sure that the reader understands why you have this opinion, and that they believe. . .

给出你的观念,保证读者了解你为啥有这种观念,而且他们信赖……信赖你撑持这个观念,晓得了吗?

That you believe this opinion. Okay?

咱们要看一下混合型论文,因为它们有一点不一样。有许多办法去写。

We’re going to look a little bit at the hybrid ones because they’re a little bit different. Lots of ways to approach it.

来看看一些思路。好的,让咱们看最终一个,混合型。

Let’s look at some ideas.
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Okay, let’s look at the last one, the hybrid.

“谈论两边的定见”或”谈论两件事,并给出你自个的定见”。嗯哼?

” Discuss both opinions” or ” Discuss both things, and give your own opinion” . Right?

所以如今,你要做的,你有必要…在你的论文中,在你的导语中,你有必要理解地告诉我,有两个方面,你要选择一个。

So, now, what you have to do, you have to. . . In your thesis, in your introduction you have to make it clear to me that there are two sides and that you choose one over the other.

所以,实践上我要…”在学校穿校服有利有弊。”

So, actually I’m going to. . . ” There are pros and cons to wearing uniforms in school” .

假定论文是:”学生大约在学校穿校服吗”?所以:”尽管我认为学生大约每天穿校服,但这是有利有弊的。”

If the essay is: ” Should students wear uniforms in school” ? So: ” There are pros and cons to wearing a uniform, though I believe that students should wear them every day” .

一个比方。所以当你告诉我有撑持和对立的时分,你记住把它放在导语中。

Okay, just as an example. So as soon as you tell me
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there are pros and cons, remember you put it in the introduction.

作为一个读者,我期望在正文里看到正反双面。晓得了吗?

As a reader I’m expecting to see the pros and cons in the body. Right?

这就是为啥先写出来。所以这就是你们谈论的方面:”谈论两边”,正反两个面。

That’s why you put it here. So that is your discuss aspect: ” Discuss both” , because pros, cons, both sides.

如今,只需你信赖了其间一个,你就要给我你的定见。晓得了吗?

Now, as soon as you believe one over the other, then you’re giving me your opinion. Okay?

很直白。如今,你方案如何切割你的主意?

Very straightforward. Now, how are you going to split up your ideas?

正文第一段,谈论两件事。谈论正反双面,需要简练一点。

Body paragraph one, discuss both things. Discuss the pros, discuss the cons, obviously very briefly.

这是短文,你不需要给我那么多的信息。给我一个正面观念,给我一个对立观念,但马上初步倾向于你选择的那个。

These are short essays, you don’t need to give me that much information. Give me one pro, give me one con, but right away start to lean to the one you’re choosing.

好吗?假定你认为学生大约穿校服,那就大约穿校服。保证最终一句话或最终几句话,向读者暗示这是你所选择的。

Right? If you’re believing that there are more pros than cons, that students should wear uniforms, make sure that the last sentence or the last couple of sentences give me, as the reader, a hint that that’s what you’re choosing.

然后在正文第2有些,完全撑持这个选择,并提及一个或两个与另一方面有关的观念。不要花太多的时刻谈论另一边,只是简略地提及就好。

And then in body paragraph two fully support that choice and make maybe one or two mentions to the other side. Don’t spend too much time going back to the other side, just make a very short mention about the other side.

所以:”被逼穿校服的学生不必每天早上都做抉择要穿啥,尽管有些人说做抉择有利于孩子的生长。”但不需要在做出选择上花时刻的话就能协助他们把更多的时刻花在学习上。”

So: ” Students who are forced to wear uniforms don’t have to make decisions every morning, although some people say that making decisions is good for a child’s development. But not having to make the choices helps them spend more time concentrating on school” .

所以,我说到了另一边,然后我很快回到了我选择的那一边,我持续撑持我的选择。

So, I mention the other side, and then quickly I come back to the side I’m choosing and I continue to support my choice. And then in the conclusion, again: ” There are benefits and drawbacks, but I believe that.

然后在结论中,再说一次:”有优点也有缺陷,但我信赖……”但不要说:”我信赖”。

. ” .

“有优点也有缺陷,但很显着,穿校服对学生有更多优点。”晓得了吗?

Actually don’t say: ” I believe” . ” There are benefits and drawbacks, but it’s clear that wearing uniforms help the students more” .

再偏重一次,有不一样的办法,非常…关于这类疑问有许多不一样的办法去写,可是要记住没有模板。

Okay? Again, very different ways to do this, very. . .

弄理解你究竟需要做啥,并保证你能做到。假定你需要给出定见,那就写;假定你不需要,不要写;假定你需要谈论并给出一个,两者都要写。好吧?

A lot of different approaches to these types of questions, but keep in mind there’s no template. Figure out exactly what you need to do and make sure that you do it.

特别要留心两个有些的疑问。有时是两个疑问,不需要定见的疑问,有时是一个描绘型疑问和一个观念型疑问。

If you need to give an opinion, give it; if you need to not give one, don’t give one; if you need to discuss and give one, do both. Okay?

它对错定见型仍是混合型?要非常留心。

Especially be careful with the two-part questions. Sometimes it’ll be two questions that don’t ask for an opinion, sometimes it’ll be one question for description, one question for an opinion.

在www.engvid.com上有一个小查验,我要保证你们能了解这些东西。假定你喜爱本视频,点个赞。

Is it non-opinion or is it a hybrid? Be very careful about that.

假定你有任何疑问,请造访www.engvid.com,那里有一个论坛,你可以问任何你想问的疑问。订阅我的频道。

There is a quiz on www. engvid. com where I make sure you guys understood all this stuff. Like the video if you liked it, please.

期望我会很快回来,用更多的优质课程来协助你们学习雅思。

And if you have any questions, please go to www. engvid. com, there’s a forum there, you can ask any questions you like. And subscribe to my channel.

再会。

And hopefully I’ll come back soon with more good lessons to help you with your IELTS. See you then.

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