雅思笔试写作真题外教范文解决交通问题的最佳方式 (含音频)-百宝汇

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你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家带来一个IELTS雅思大作文真题(2021.11.20真题)的原创范文。

老规矩，以下是正文目录：

1，题目

2，审题

3，高分范文

4，范文朗读

5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：

题目改述
观点类大作文高分句型
展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型

题目：

The best way to solve traffic and transportation problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than the suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

审题：

Type: Opinion 观点类大作文 (我的观点：not the best way)
Body 1: good but causes societal problems
Body 2: however, creation and connecting of satellite communities is better, as is creating an effective public transportation system
Key word(s): ‘the best way’ — this is what we will argue for or against.

– Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 –

▲范文音频戳这里▲

These days, it is commonly cited that the best method for solving traffic congestion and transport issues is to persuade citizens to inhabit metropolises instead of suburban and rural areas. In my opinion, though this concept certainly has positive aspects, I do not think it is the best method to solve these transportation-related challenges.

The central tenet behind this concept of centralizing work and living spaces to reduce traffic issues is based on the idea that people will have no use for vehicles, and thus, fewer cars will be seen on the road. This idea though, is likely to cause another problem in place of the one it solves, namely overcrowding, suggesting that

by convincing people to locate in one dense metropolitan center, other societal problems will arise. In fact, studies show that overcrowding leads to a multitude of social issues, such as increased domestic violence, and so, while centrally positioning accommodation and place of work together will reduce traffic, the trade-off in problems this would likely produce seem not to warrant such a policy.

This is not to say, however, that the concept of centralization is incorrect. In fact, this concept is one of the most effective means to solve traffic congestion, but instead of centrally locating all jobs and homes in one area, they can be situated in smaller zones. This has occurred in Guangzhou, China, for example, where many of the satellite towns, suburbs and rural areas surrounding the city have become mini-centers of business and industry in their own right. Such

specialization, coupled with an effective public transport network, has given rise to residents being able to live close to their work, yet without being overcrowded, while simultaneously, allowing them the convenience of living near the city.

In conclusion, while the concept of centralization is a sound proposal for reducing traffic issues, persuading people to amass in one central area for both work and living will likely cause overcrowding; hence, I believe business specialization of satellite towns and surrounding metropolitan areas, connected by an effective public transport system, is more practical in helping to solve traffic congestion.