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i shouldnt do that. i cursed too much.
i just finished the video search about the?topic of（…的主题）?surrogacy. i am going to make a new?series of（…系列的）?videos about this topic. i spent the first draft back two years ago. i found one magazine, elle（时髦杂志（书名））; i would like to know if i pronounced it right. there is a video named shes having my baby: the complicated business of surrogacy in america. and there are?a lot of comments on that. that was four years ago.
someone commented that surrogacy（代孕）?is a blessing for me. and there is one particular person who said that she completed a commercial surrogacy（商业代孕）?deal in ukraine.
many girls commented on this video that surrogacy seems like a good option.
and someone said that i think 2000 euros?is too much for the compensation.
you know what? you are exploiting（克扣）?others, and you think that thats too expensive? and you think that is a blessing? what are you thinking about?
i know thats none of my business. surrogacy is illegal in china. but not technically. i am going to explain this in other videos.
but the news about ukraine. these women are suffering for money to conceive（受孕）?for someone else. they are suffering. and you think its a blessing for you. you could pay others to have your children.
this world is crazy; i know that the world is insane. but i dont remember that insane so profoundly（严峻地；完全地）.
i searched a lot of news, chinese news, american news, and other international news. and those comments make me feel disgusting.
some people will put stickers advertising commercial surrogacy in hospital toilets. there were some comments say that or im pretty neutral（中立的）?on the matter. i do not approve of it or reject it altogether. my child was born through commercial surrogacy.
the truth is that you are crazy and selfish; you just find excuses for yourself.
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american clients certainly feel that foreign commercial surrogacy is very good. because these people are not ukrainian commercial surrogate mothers but middle-class americans. they went to ukraine to rob poor and desperate ukrainian women. that country was regarded as a european brothel and a european womb.
commercial surrogacy is legal in several states in the united states, and there is relatively complete legislation(法令)?on this?issue.
i infer（揣度）?that some americans do not conduct commercial surrogacy in their own country?are due to (but not limited to)?the following reasons.
1. they are not eligible（契合条件的）?for commercial surrogacy
2. commercial surrogacy is not legal in their state
3. they cannot find a suitable surrogate mother locally
4. they do not have enough budget
they cannot afford a national surrogate, so they go to ukraine to conduct that. wouldnt it be nice to spend $50,000 less? and they also only need to pay 250 euros per month to compensate the surrogate mother (even less money to surrogate mothers in other countries).
it does not matter if the child has any problem because the child born in a foreign country does not have american citizenship, so it is easy to abandon them.
surrogacy agencies are, of course, concerned with the interests of their clients. because it only needs to give 1/3 of the profit (or even less) to the surrogate mother and inject three embryos into the pregnant mother at a time, this is a high medical risk for the surrogate mother.
furthermore, if surrogacy surgery fails, the agency could give up this deal without any responsibility to the?mother. the medical environment the?agency provides is like a pigsty（猪圈）, and they are not responsible for the surrogate mothers health. the agency could also refuse to pay or give those women a salary below their loss.
commercial surrogacy agencies in developing countries are lucrative without any legal risk if they have a cunning legal department.
it’s unbelievable and insanely naive（单纯的）?these people from developed countries?really think that surrogacy agencies care about strangers.they are deluding（掩耳盗铃）?themself. if surrogate companies do not think they are profitable（有利可图）, they mean nothing to them.
those people who support commercial surrogacy. they are too hypocritical（虚伪的）?to admit that they are obsessed with passing their genes, so they cannot choose adoption（领养）.

this is elles official account on mainstream video platforms（干流视频平台）, with 2.32 million subscribers. it is a fashion magazine read by thousands of female readers worldwide. do they even realize they are posting things poisoning their targeted female readers?
or this only means a?promotional stunt（宣传噱头）, a business for them?
this is the consequence of legalizing commercial surrogacy. everything turns into campaigns and ads, plus some unscrupulous（无耻之徒；不道德的）?businessmen stepping on the flesh and blood of people experiencing poverty, which is inhumane.
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作为客户的美国人当然会对国外的商业代孕很满足。因为ta们是大有些美国中产阶层白人，而不是无路可退的乌克兰代孕妇。这些人跑去乌克兰去抢掠贫穷绝望的乌克兰女人，而那个国家不只被视为欧洲妓院也是被称作欧洲子宫。
美国本乡几个州商业代孕都合法，而且就此有相对完善的法令。我揣度（谈论者）不在美国本乡做商业代孕的出于（但不只限于）以下几个缘由:1.美国买方家庭不契合地址州商业代孕的条件2.美国买方家庭地址的州商业代孕不合法3.美国买方家庭无法找到满足的代孕妇3.美国买方家庭核算缺乏
买方无法承受国内商业代孕的价格，所以到乌克兰进行生意。
在乌克兰商业代孕的开支会比美国低整整五万美元。除了交费外，买家只用给代孕妇250欧元作为抵偿（假定在其他国家，例如印度或许我国，甚至会给的更少）。孩子出疑问了也没联络，因为它们没有美国国籍，所以扔掉它们垂手可得。
商业代孕机构当然重视客户的利益，机构只需要拿出三分之一的获利（甚至更少）给代孕妇，这些女人的薪水远远低于她们应得的。机构供给的医疗环境像个猪圈，对代孕妇的安康视若无物。代孕进程中机构为了前进手术成功的几率可以一次给孕母打针三个胚胎，这意味极高的医疗风险。而假定手术失利，机构可以扔掉代孕妇。
打开我国家的商业代孕机构只需有满足精明的团队就可以一本万利。
兴隆国家的客户对外国商业代孕机构的赞许几乎不凶咴思议。“机构非常在乎我的利益”这一主意也惊人的单纯，甚至可以说是掩耳盗铃。假定不是中介机构认为ta们有利可图，那于机构而言，这些撑持商业代孕的人不过是为言辞造势的东西。
虚伪的的利益既得者无法城市地上对自个的赋性——他们太在乎基因的传承致使于无法选择领养。
elle作为在世界各地具有许多年青女人读者的时髦杂志，它选择将这个视频宣告在具有232万观众的干流视频平台的官方账号上，它们理解自个是毒害自个的方针读者吗？仍是它们认为“商业代孕”可以被作为噱头，可以因其商场潜力而被大力宣传？
这就是商业代孕合法化的成果:悉数都可以被视为宣传和广告，再凭仗有些道德沦丧且利字当头的生意人，就可以改动为对穷户血肉的合理克扣。