成都市成人英语培训:2022年哈尔滨市道里区一模考试英语作文说明(含参阅范文)


原题有些 六、书面表达(本题共20分) 假定你是学校英语网站的修改李平,回到学校上课很高兴,但疫情(the s…

原题有些
六、书面表达(本题共20分)
假定你是学校英语网站的修改李平,回到学校上课很高兴,但疫情(the spread of the covid 19 pandemic)仍然没有结束。请你根据以下信息,给你校学生写一封信,告诉他们在防疫时刻作为大学生如何坚持开心的心境。
写作要害:
1.很怅惘居家时刻一些同学常常心境不好。
2.罗列同学们在居家时刻的一些不当体现:
(1)与父母顶嘴;
(2)上网课时看动画片。
3.告诉同学们防疫时刻作为大学生如何坚持开心的心境。

写作需求:
1. 不得运用真实名字和学校名。
2. 可恰当参加细节,使内容充分,行文联接。
3. 笔迹规整、言语精练、表达精确、条理清楚。
4. 至少80词。

dear friends,
we are all very glad that we come back to study at school._________________
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____________________________________________________成都市成人英语培训 _________
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best wishes!
yours,
li ping
答案有些
(以下范文是王教师亲自写的,转发请注明出处)
书面表达参阅答案
dear friends,
we are all very glad that we come back to study at school. but at the same time, i feel sorry to hear that some of us students were not so happy when staying at home. some quarreled with their parents and some even watched cartoons while having online classes. i know we are facing a tough time, but we should behave as well as before.

life is always full of ups and downs, so we need to do everything we can to keep studying and stay positive. first, we can communicate with our parents. being stuck at home by no means sounds like a exciting thing, so naturally we may feel upset. therefore, by talking with our parents about our feelings, we may get relaxed. after all, they
成都市成人英语培训:2022年哈尔滨市道里区一模考试英语作文说明(含参阅范文)插图(1)
are 成都市成人英语培训experienced adults and will surely give us useful advice. second, there are many activities that we can do to amuse ourselves. for example, we can read books, listen to music or watch movies. as long as we try to cheer ourselves up, there are always solutions out there.

my dear friends, we are not kids any more. we have already grown up. when faced with problems, we should think about methods to work them out. this is what we should do.

best wishes!

yours,
li ping
讲评有些
本次作文,要肄业生写开心高兴的办法。这个比照简略,能写的具体办法也许多。同学们也可以完全把“假定减轻压力”搬场过来即可。

我在写作的时分,为了不机械地写两个具体的办法(比方听音乐和读书),而是选择把这些都归纳为具体的行为。偏重行为,然后再用具体的办法举例。这样能活络一些,不至于太呆板。一起,与人交流也是很重要的一点。同学们也可以在观念处偏重与别人交流,然后在证明处多介绍些可以交流的目标即可,比方父母,兄弟,教师,同学,网友等等。

2021年的中考作文,就考了这个论题,如何做一个高兴的大学生。咱们可以从以下几个方面思考:(1)做自个喜爱做的事儿,培育快乐喜爱喜爱;(2)多参加各种活动,收成经历,交兄弟;(3)多读书、多听音乐等具体活动。等等等等。

拓宽本钱
take some exercise like jogging 成都市成人英语培训 and swimming 做运动listening to music is also a good idea听歌communicate our anxiety with others 与人交流not to keep it 成都市成人英语培训 to myself 别憋着share your feelings with others like your friends, your parents and so on 说出来speaking out what worries you means you are already half way to success.说出来就成功一半了(完)

作者:王兴刚教师(大众号|头条号|抖音号:王教师英语教育),英语教师,从事教育16年。本号往常推文首要包括:初大学英语常识的收拾和分析,中高考英语考点的说明与总结。推文首要面向中高考学生,每日共享学生们可以实真实在用得到的英语常识,特别合适双减后可以独立学习的初大学生!

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