原题有些

六、书面表达(本題共20分)
假定你叫李华，你的美国笔友simon给你发来邮件，告诉你他要伴随父母来我国日子一段时刻，为了让他从速习气在我国的日子，请你根据以下信息给他回一封电子邮件，并给他提出一些有关主张。
写作要害：
1. 等待他来到我国。
2. 介绍几个我国的传统及风俗习气：
(1) 名字的写法：姓氏在前，名字在后；
(2) 初度碰头：握手；
(3) 谈论的论题：年纪、家庭等。
3. 请你给simon提出在我国日子的具体主张。
写作需求：
1. 不得运用真实名字和学校名。
2. 可恰当参加细节，使内容充分，行文联接。
3. 笔迹规整、言语精练、表达精确、条理清楚。
4. 至少80词。
dear simon,
im very glad to hear from you.____________
____________________________________
____汉语口语速成提高篇________________________________
yours,
li hua
答案有些
（以下范文是王教师亲自写的，转发请注明出处）
dear simon,
im very glad to hear from you. in your letter, you told me that you will come to china with your parents and stay here for a while. i am so excited to know that! welcome to china, my dear friend. now, let me introduce some chinese 汉语口语速成提高篇 traditions and customs to you. different from american names, we chinese put our given game after the family name. take me for example. li is

my family name and put before hua. besides, when we meet new friends, we would like to shake hands to show our politeness, so don’t be scared if you see people reach out their hands towards you. last, we can talk about a person’s family and even his or her age. these topics are usually avoided in america because they are private, but we can share them in china.
i have some advice for you to live a better life here. first, you’d better learn some chinese. you can watch some chinese films or read some books, or you can simply turn to me for help. second, practice using chopsticks. as you may know, chinese people eat with chopsticks instead of knife and fork. third, find the map of the city you are 汉语口语速成提高篇 going to live in and remember some landmarks, which may help you adapt to a new city quickly.
have a great time in china.
yours,
li

hua.

讲评有些

本篇作文难度适中，挺合适学生写作的。特别是“布景介绍+要害1&2”有些，没太大难度。
咱们同学写作的时分，思考到字数，只需要把要害2里边的三个小点介绍理解即可，不必像我范文相同，过渡许多。过渡多，行文流通，可是致使字数显着超载。
一起，关于要害3来说，这是很中规中矩的“主张类”作文出题方法。就要依照“1个主题句+两个具体主张+两个具体主张的说明句”这汉语口语速成提高篇个套路写就可以了。
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